Subject
Your landing page just got roasted 🔥
Opening
Your homepage reads like a product brief that escaped before QA. Nine features, zero clear promise — I genuinely don't know what I'm supposed to do when I land here.
What's broken
- The headline
Modern SaaS for teamscould describe 80% of B2B tools on the internet. - Your CTA button says
Get startedthree times above the fold. Pick one and mean it. - The hero has four screenshots stacked — they're fighting each other, not selling anything.
Fix this week
- Rewrite the H1 as a specific outcome (who, what changes in minutes, proof).
- Consolidate CTAs to one. Second-tier CTAs become plain text links.
- Replace the hero collage with one screenshot showing the product mid-action.
Placeholder example — real roasts are tuned per page.